Weekly Throwout!

Well, Its that time again. Another throw out for your reading pleasure. I have been a busy bee this week. Reading, writing, WORKING!! its been hell. Anyhoo, I am bringing you a little more of my newest work this week, attempting to sort through the sexy parts and bring you the parts that lack. I guess I am just not comfortable posting these scenes on line, leaving it to the imagination.

I am on a book hangover, and those usually make me doubt my abilities as a writer. When you read something that makes you ugly cry, you wonder if you will ever write something that evokes that kind of response in someone else. I am working on trying to write an argument scene, to hone my skills and evoke emotion...We will see were that leads.

Without further ado..

Detour


                “Let’s stop here.” I blurt out before he passes. He slams on his breaks and takes the turn at the last minute, bumping violently over a small curb. We pull in to a spot in the nearly empty lot and he throws the rig in park. Turning toward him, as he flinches a little in surprise, I finally unleash the verbal vomit that I am known for back home.

                “Seriously, what was his deal?” I motion back toward the drug store. “Does he really think that shit worked on me? Is he your friend, because he is a total douchenozzle?” I half shout at Rayce, who sits doe eyed across the trucks bench seat.

                Rayce give a smirk, then a full on toothy grin that reaches his eyes. He chuckles under his breath, shaking his head, until it turns into a full on belly laugh. It’s my turn to stare at him blankly, trying to figure out what is so funny. He finally stops laughing hysterically, his body sill convulsing with the occasional chuckle. Once he has himself together, he finally answers my questions.

                “Cotter is my best friend, and I believe you are the first girl to ever outright reject him. He is pretty sure he is god’s gift to women, but the ladies have never given him a reason to believe otherwise.” The laugh lines around his eyes are still present.  

                “I fucking hate pretty boys.” I growl, grabbing my purse and swinging myself out of the truck.

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There you are, hopefully it feeds your literary needs for a week :) like/comment/share and have a great week!

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