Thursday Throwout

Hi all,
Still working on getting the new cover and acknowledgements on muse. I am switching it to Kindle Unlimited as soon as I have those changes made. Hopefully I can get more sales. As of right now it is only 99 cents on Amazon. I had to take it down from all of the other sites to put in on Kindle Select SOO that is the only place it is available for at least the next 90 days. For right now I can share my beautiful new cover art with you, and another snippet for Detour for your reading pleasure. ENJOY!

 
cover art by Carrie Anderson
 
 
 
 

Detour

 
 
I stare in the mirror one last time before heading down to meet Rayce. My dark auburn locks, pulled into a high messy bun. Not the post work out messy bun, but the fun flirty kind with the curls falling everywhere. I have lined my eyes with brown kohl, and dusted the shine away. I turn in the mirror and check to make sure all my junk is in the right places. I dressed in tight jeans, cowboy boots, and a fitted button down just for him.
 Rayce. Is this guy for real? I have no clue why a man, that I have barely just met, is eliciting such an emotional response in me. I still have doubts about his intentions. However, the sincerity in his eyes when he told me he thinks I am beautiful was unmistakable. Reapplying my shiny lip-gloss, I take a cleansing breath, and saunter down to the living room where Rayce waits.
His eyes trace my curves as I walk down the stairs. I feel as if he is peeling the cloths off me with that look alone. Rayce is the epitome of the bad boy image. Giant war bird tattoo spanning the entirety of his massive shoulders. The beast’s beak peeking over the neckline of the back of his shirt, just begging to be freed. His rock hard abs and pecks are fighting against his shirt with every movement. That beautiful hard V, that begs you to drag your hand over it to find the treasure at the end, teases me. He is sin personified, and my body wants every inch of his blasphemy.
 
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Thanks again for Visiting. Remember that this is just rough material :) see you next week


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