Thursday Throw Out!!!

Welcome back friends! Well this day has brought me a lovely migraine and a double shift. So needless to say this is the highlight of my day thus far!!!I have been working on muse vol 2, forcing myself to edit, and setting my Newsletter through MailChimp So I can provide those that choose to receive it the novellas that go along with the muse series. I may also send some release information and appearance info(if I am ever asked to appear, I know I am getting ahead of myself there :P ).

I REALLY REALLY REALLY  want this, so I am hoping to get all of this buttoned up, and released soon, hopefully before the end of summer. I am just praying that I don't make a complete fool of myself. I can only do so much, and with limited resources I am afraid I will fall flat compared to most. However, I truly believe in my story, so hopefully everyone else will as well!!! I just wish more people would leave feedback for me to build with!! So keep that in mind while you enjoy the teaser!!!

Muse Vol. 2


The ferry starts to move away from the dock and I gasp. Pushing forward, I reach out toward Edmond, only to be stopped by an invisible force and held still, forced to watch as the boat disappears into the blackness of the underworld. The hidden constraint releases me and I drop to my knees. Cali helps me to my feet, but takes a step back as I turn to face the Charon, enraged by his betrayal.

“You promised us passage to the Oracle.”

His disembodied voice once again enters my mind, causing me to flinch. “I promised the daughters of Mnemosyne passage to the Oracle. Only the son of Hades, and the messenger are able to enter the underworld with their lives.

“And Pluto?” I ask.

“His souls fate will be decided by the king.”
 
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W ell that's it for this week folks! Remember to like and share on facebook..and feedback is always welcome!!!
PS..something funky happened with my formatting so sorry for the weirdness!!

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