Feeling a little defeated. Got Muse back today and I have a ton of work to do on it. I wish I did not have to work all the time so I could devote more time to getting it out. Oh well, I can't let this get me down. As my favorite animated fish says, just keep swimming......
With a little help from my friends Thursday throw out
So I was given a some constructive criticism from a beta who's opinion I value greatly. She was not a fan of my original prologue for one of my books. I redid it with the suggestions she gave me. After several drafts, trying out different concepts, I finally had something I thought was acceptable. Unfortunately, I am still in love with my first idea. This is where you come in! Tonight I am posting both prologues for said book. I want to put it to a vote. If you could please read both versions posted below. Then, either leave the coinciding letter in the comments below or on the Facebook post that brought you to this page. You may also leave any comments or critique you may have below. The comments are not published unless I approve them, so if you would rather them not be visible please specify. Here We GO!!!!! A Two years prior I climb into the limousine that the funeral home provides for the grieving fami...
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